PWN!!!!!

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i wish i had somethin fancy to put here..

*glomps Break and his now emoness*

: D

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“Now you'll know the pain... The pain I went through. The pain of your hate you bestowed upon me these 15 years.”

I scrap stories constantly.

XD

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"Trust me, when you get a girl you like and you want to get it on, there's no better way to kick things off then a nice big keg 'o mouthwash.
God damn, I creep myself out sometimes. Lol."

~MouthWashed

XD Thanks, sis.

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"Trust me, when you get a girl you like and you want to get it on, there's no better way to kick things off then a nice big keg 'o mouthwash.
God damn, I creep myself out sometimes. Lol."

~MouthWashed

:/ I normally do too, but I was trying to be serious for once. D:

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"Trust me, when you get a girl you like and you want to get it on, there's no better way to kick things off then a nice big keg 'o mouthwash.
God damn, I creep myself out sometimes. Lol."

~MouthWashed

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i wish i had somethin fancy to put here..

Hello this is solemonias-the-wise, from dacademy, and ill be critiquing your picure.

I love the character design overall, but when i look deeper into the picture i see alot of odd things:
#1: I cant really tell whether or not the character is really a boy or girl. I'd like it to be a little more evident.

#2: The teeth dont really look like real vampire teeth (if thats what you were going for). Usually vampire teeth tend to be more on the inside than the outside. And the shaping is very off.

#3: There are way too many wrinkles in the clothes for him/her to be standing in that position. They wrinkles imply that the character is turning, but on the inside it is'nt.

Lastly: The proportions and anatomy seem a bit off. I counted by heads and noticed that his pelvic region is too short. Alot of people have issues with proportions so i would'nt worry about it much.

All in all i say the overall look and feel of the character is good, all you need to work on is anatomy and proportions.

Hope i helped.

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I thought I wrote a comment on this before... but maybe not.

It's a great anime drawing, only thing that looks odd is the angle of the vhain at the bottom. It's kind of defying gravity. I think you should do some colouring on this peice too, definately ink it.